Wednesday, September 19, 2012

Graf # 13 sample cause

I really liked the cause essay on falling in love and the tomato lover essay. I see how the flow should be. Taking the intro and expanding on the reasons one paragraph at a time. I think it will be hard sticking to why and not falling into how something happened. I hope to show how certain effects or reasons caused the event instead of showing the effects of the cause. This will be a tricky essay to nail down.

2 comments:

  1. Glad those two in particular appealed--I wrote one and had a big stake in the other.

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  2. cool I'm having trouble finding some topic to write the cause essay about.

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