Graf #17 Reaction to Cause Essay Comments

I was pleased with the critique of my first draft of the cause essay. I put a lot into this piece and was proud of it.  I revised it slightly making the recommended changes. The final opinion of the essay was what I hoped it would be. I love a challenge and I'm glad I was able to meet your expectations. I have never been as they say a "smart student" so I'm very happy to be doing well at EMCC especially in English 101.